My name is Nathaniel A children must have breakfast everyday it’s so they can impressed their memory to the teacher.
Firstly Children should have more breakfast because it’s so they can stay on task and not struggle.
Secondly you could make a drink throughout the day. But it only takes about 10 or 9 mins.
Thirdly if u don’t have breakfast you may feel sleepy and confused so that's why breakfast has fiber in it.
It's so you can excretion all of the things out of you so as like pee and poo .
I've chosen this post it’s to let all the children in the world even the ones who has no roof under their heads to stay healthy and eat more fiber.
The most exciting part was voice typing and the most challenging part was the voice typing writing the wrong thing.How I overcome it was correcting it.
Good simple persuading Nathaniel! Do you really want the whole world to read about pee and poo though? Also, where do you think your reflection should go?
ReplyDeleteNice work Nath.A but maybe you could put your reflection in the beginning so that people knows what happens before they read the article. Also in the beginning you use impress instead of impressed but other than that nice work!
ReplyDeleteNice work Nath.A but maybe you could put your reflection in the beginning so that people knows what happens before they read the article. Also in the beginning you use impress instead of impressed but other than that nice work!
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