To Nathaniel A's group.I really liked how you guys put up a nice picture of breakfast to try and make the people who see this drool and want to eat breakfast club.What I think you need to work on is that you have to add in some sentences like what time does breakfast club open and also some more detail of where breakfast club is located at.But other then that good job at trying your best at all times. From:Caroline
Talofa lava Nathaniel, It's me your favourite cousin ... I have been really happy that you and your group has put a presentation to interest people on your fantastic breakfast club. I think that you and your group should fill in the blank slides because it's not showing the audience the explanation for the blank slides but you and group has done really well.
To Nathaniel A's group.I really liked how you guys put up a nice picture of breakfast to try and make the people who see this drool and want to eat breakfast club.What I think you need to work on is that you have to add in some sentences like what time does breakfast club open and also some more detail of where breakfast club is located at.But other then that good job at trying your best at all times.
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I like the photo you chose for the slide show. I think Caroline's idea above about more information is a great suggestion.
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ReplyDeleteTalofa lava Nathaniel,
ReplyDeleteIt's me your favourite cousin ... I have been really happy that you and your group has put a presentation to interest people on your fantastic breakfast club. I think that you and your group should fill in the blank slides because it's not showing the audience the explanation for the blank slides but you and group has done really well.
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